...this one made me nearly dance in my living room with the thrill of discovery

Brush Up Your Shakespeare Month Contest with kellyrfineman 

I never would've figured out on my own that this particular dialogue from Romeo and Juliet was in fact a Shakespearean sonnet. I'll let Kelly explain the pattern's unique features here. Read the sonnet, then check out Zeffirelli's interpretation here, then swing back to Kelly's blog here so you can enter the contest too!

Romeo
If I profane with my unworthiest hand
This holy shrine, the gentle sin is this:
My lips, two blushing pilgrims, ready stand
To smooth that rough touch with a tender kiss.

Juliet
Good pilgrim, you do wrong your hand too much,
Which mannerly devotion shows in this;
For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.

Romeo
Have not saints lips, and holy palmers too?

Juliet
Ay, pilgrim, lips that they must use in prayer.

Romeo
O, then, dear saint, let lips do what hands do;
They pray: grant thou, lest faith turn to despair.

Juliet
Saints do not move, though grant for prayers' sake.

Romeo
Then move not, while my prayer's effect I take.
Thus from my lips, by yours, my sin is purged.

Juliet
Then have my lips the sin that they have took.

Romeo
Sin from thy lips? O trespass sweetly urged!
Give me my sin again.

Juliet
                You kiss by the book.

Remember when you were 12 years old and you became convinced you knew everything? That probably ended sometime around 30, when you realized how very little about the world you actually understood.

Now that I'm 42 and the mother of a 12-year-old boy, I have to say I did know something very important way back then, something I'd forgotten as I grew older: 

12-year-old boys are weird. And they stink. A lot.

Take 20 minutes out of your day to watch this. You won't regret it.

Come visit me at kidlit central, where I try to pace myself with character development. Here's a teaser for you:

What do you do when someone reads your first five or ten pages and says, "I want to know more about this character." Even though they might say, "Where does this person live?" or "What does this person look like?" it really isn't about "rank and file" info: name, age, location, heritage, eye color, height, weight, favorite color. What they really are saying is "I'm not getting enough to get a sense of who this person is."

Terms like "sensory details" "voice" "action verbs" get tossed around a lot, but what is the magical combination of all these elements that begats  the perfect word choice, the perfect pace for revelation? 

Everyone swing over to seaheidi and check out her gorgeous cover!

No. 2 son: What can I do around the house to make money that isn't cleaning up my room? I know. I can massage your feet.

Me: But it's Mother's Day. I shouldn't have to pay for it.

No. 2 son: But I'm a professional.

Monday after a busy weekend - quiet time to write. Today I am supposed to finish a freelance article due in a few days. So far I have:

• skimmed a backlog of Live Journal posts
• read movie quotes from "I Love You, Man" at imbd.com
• learned more than I ever wanted to know about Billy Joe Armstrong and the other Green Day boys at Wikipedia
• commented on various Facebook pictures and status updates
• sent my cousin a youtube link to "Carol Brown (A Choir of Ex-Girlfriends)"
• Let my dogs out of the house
• Let my dogs back in the house
• rounded up a weekend's worth of dirty laundry
• savored the taste of a Hershey chocolate bar, broken into rectangles and dipped into peanut butter
• paid two bills
• stared at the now-full laundry basket still waiting to be carried downstairs to the washing machine.

And now the morning is nearly over. *sigh*

 

For those of you who haven't already seen it, swing over to lauramanivong  and check out the cover to her novel!
Countdown to Feb. 17, 2010 begins now

Everyone, please welcome lishacauthen  to LIve Journal. You can get to know her better at Kidlit Central today!

Everyone, swing over to susanuhlig  and welcome Sue to Live Journal! Sue is the Kansas SCBWI regional advisor, champion dangling-participle wrangler, and one of the ladies I meet regularly for writing dates/giggle sessions.

(apologies to Lisha Cauthen. I tried to channel your creative Sue-labeling, but I think I fell short)

Swing by KidLit Central this evening and read a deciphered version of my latest rejection from a literary agent!

I just posted over at KidLit Central. Today I share writing tips to help turn your imaginations into formidable forces of good.

My friend and fellow Heartlander Barb Stuber sold her first novel, a YA called CROSSING THE TRACKS!!!

Karen Wojtyla, executive editor at Margaret K. McElderry, a division of Simon and Schuster, and clearly a woman of extraordinary taste, says novel is lyrical and haunting, wrapped her in an embrace and spoke to her heart. And having read much of CROSSING THE TRACKS, I can attest to that. Put this on your MUST BUY list for 2010.

Congratulations, Barb and your wondeful agent Ginger Knowlton! May this be the first of many celebrations for your partnership!

April Henry is celebrating the release of her newest book TORCHED with a giveaway!

Torched releases tomorrow!
When Ellie’s parents are busted for growing pot, the FBI thinks they've finally found a way inside Mother Earth Defenders, a radical environmental group. They give her a choice: infiltrate MED or her parents will go to jail. At first Ellie is more than willing to entrap the MEDics, but the more time she spends undercover—particularly with Coyote, the green-eyed MEDic that she can’t stop thinking about—the more she starts to believe in their cause. When talk turns to murder, Coyote backs out, but Ellie is willing to risk everything to save her family—even if it means losing Coyote and putting her own life on the line.

Kirkus says "the thrills and action will keep readers interested." Booklist says, "The contemporary mix of politics and thrilling action will grab teens, not just environmentalists."

I say: it's time for a giveway!I'd love to give a couple of signed copies away!

It's so simple!
1. Go to aprilhenry and omment on her post and let her know you're in.
2. To get your name in twice, paste the link to April's livejournal, or copy this post into your blog.
3. Wait until March 15, when Teen Henry will draw the winners.

Thanks for playing along!

Yay! I love contests :) Congratulations April!!!!!!

No. 1 son, after finally finding No. 2 son during a game of hide and seek: He found the best hiding place ever.

Me: Where?
 

No. 1 son: Right under everyone's nose. Like a booger.

Today we ponder why nothing else will ever reach the same pedestal-bound heights of your first love. Book love, that is.

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